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Matthias Choi (4P)

The Great Solar System

This is my imaginary solar system, “The Great Solar System”. There are five planets in this

solar system, and they are War Planet (the planet of war), Turning Mecard Planet (the planet of

the turning mecard, Poke – Planet (the planet of Pokemon), Justice World (the planet of heros),

and lastly, Dark Planet (the planet of baddies). Each planet has its own uniqueness, and I’m

going to tell you about them now!

First, I’m going to tell you about their similarities. Just like our solar system, there are also

people, water, food and air. There are a lot of trees and beautiful scenery.

Now, I’m going to tell you about their differences. As I’ve said before, my solar system has

five planets. It doesn’t have a sun, a moon, stars, comets and asteroids. And unlike our solar

system, it doesn’t have an orbit! But the creepiest thing of all is the fact that there are …… aliens!

Each planet has its own species of alien according to the planet’s name.

I hope that my solar system can become real so I can visit it because I think it’s cool.

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